rough cut feedback

1. genre and use of conventions
- people have said the video suits the music genre
- good setting for the genre
- good lip synching
- very good video with correct location and narrative.

2. performance
- similar performances but works well
- liked tom the bassist!
- fef's keyboard done well
- neil playing lead singer is good, lipsynching good, well done neil

3. mise en scene
- samey setting
- no background story or other scene shots
- good location, needs cut aways
- liked the 'floating' photos.

4. camerawork
- different camera shots used well
- everyine is filmed in detail throughout
- variety of shots
- close ups worked well
- shot through tree was good
- good spinning

5. editing
- good effort
- nice cuts
- variety keeps audience engaged
- nicely paced

6. suggestions for additional footage
- film some narrative shots
- needs more close ups
- relate to photographs.